When do you change the storyline? “It’s a gas shop!!” Episode 9 making commentary complete version

In episode 9 of `` At the Gas Shop!! '', Kiyu Kase, who has just joined a gas shop, struggles as a planner for a large-scale event called ``Gas Exhibition''. The progress towards holding the gas exhibition will be described. Looking back at the making of Episode 9, there were some parts that were swapped with the development of Episode 10 that was planned at the name stage, so I focused on the question, ``Why did they change the story from the plot to the name?'' We will provide detailed making-of information.
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The development of episode 9 of “It’s a Gas Shop!!” is divided into three major parts. First, Kiyu participates in the planning meeting even though she is worried about her physical and mental health, as a new event called 'Achievement Competition' has been added to the already busy planning of the 'Gas Exhibition.' Then, overwhelmed by fatigue and pressure, Kiyu finally collapses.

Because of her tendency to work too hard, Kiyu learned that it was important to stop and rest, and she overcame her anxiety and grew even more. The main development of episode 9 is that the gas exhibition is finally held, a mixture of tension and anticipation.

On the other hand, looking at the initial names, there were some scenes that were not depicted in the main story. First of all, in the initial name, Arika-senpai was the only one who participated in the planning meeting for the gas exhibition, and after that, Kiyu holds a strategy meeting at the company while listening to details from Arika-san. However, in the published manuscript, Kiyu was also changed to participate in the planning meeting. For Kiyu, participating in an important meeting made her feel the pressure directly.

The following is a scene where Mitsuki, a young lady with the strongest track record and who is Kiyu's rival, has a strategy meeting. It was a nice scene where Mitsuki, who seemed perfect, was heading toward her goal with all her might, but it was cut because it changed the flow of the story.

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In addition, Mitsuki's boss 'Chief Wakihata', who was depicted in Mitsuki's strategy meeting scene, appears in the main story at a meeting Kiyu attended. According to their names, Mitsuki, the president's daughter, and Chief Wakihata have been friends for quite some time, but that conversation has been cut from the main story.

Another important scene that was cut from the initial version is the scene where Iga-senpai calls out to Kiyu, who is worried about the gas exhibition. What did Iga-senpai, who is also the instructor of Kiyu, a newcomer, do to relieve Kiyu's anxiety? That scene will be shown in episode 10.

Below is the final page of the initial name. From the initial name, ``Kiyu will participate in the general meeting rather than the strategy meeting at the company,'' ``Mitsuki's strategy meeting will be cut,'' and ``Kiyu's hospitalization, which was scheduled for episode 10, will be changed to episode 9.'' A change was made to ``move the scene drawn in the name of episode 9 to episode 10.'' The reason for these changes is mainly for one reason: ``Episode 8 had a big move in preparation for the gas exhibition, but episode 9 just explained the details and said, ``I'll do my best!'' I felt like the story wasn't moving. Therefore, we moved the important but not moving scene of ``Iga-senpai balds Kiyu'' from episode 9 to episode 10, and moved the apparently big scene of ``Kiyu falling down'' to episode 9. ” has occurred.

Furthermore, the following pages were added with the author's idea of ``increasing the density and increasing the satisfaction when reading.'' The progress of the fallen Kiyu from his resurrection to the day of the event is lined up in detailed panels, and the story progresses quickly until the gas exhibition is held. In addition, the image below on the left is name 2, and the image on the right is name 3, and some cuts have been changed. If you read the changed cuts here, you'll understand why they were changed after reading episode 10, so please look forward to it.

Another minor correction is that Kiyu's facial expression on the final page has been fine-tuned. In the images below, both the left and right images are drawn with the concept of ``Kyuu, who was worried, struggled, and even fell down, but was able to welcome the gas exhibition with a smile.'' In the image on the right, she takes a deep breath and then smiles. By adding Kiyu's facial expression change of 'Naru', it is designed to give a more natural and positive impression.

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